Some annoying things
You made a good movie with some nice humor, but you would be better off not doing you own voice acting. It sounds like your wispering into the mic. It doesn't sound accutly like anything what I imagine your normal tone would be, sort of like your doing the voice acting while trying not to wake somone next to you up. Other than that, good movie, real good animation, some promising stuff if you can work on the voices a bit more ( Dont be shy to nearly scream, sometimes you have to, and plus no one who watches this will see you in real life, so nothing to be embarrassed of :P )